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How to create a mary sue. by Kitty-Kozuki How to create a mary sue. by Kitty-Kozuki
How to create a Naruto OC mary sue?
It's easy. But let's just start by understand the meaning of "mary sue".
A "mary sue" is a "perfect character". By looking at the picture and information I created in the picture, you would probably notice. "Wow. She is so powerful." Yes. But "I never lose a fight with my eneimies" That was a key point. People are bound to fail a fight. You can't win every single one of them.
Let's start to create your VERY OWN MARY SUE!
1) Let's start by background information: Having a slaughtered clan, slaughtering a clan pratically SCREAMS "I'M A FREAKING MARY SUE!" So do add that in the information. Also. DO add a demon into your character so she can be powerful.

2) Then, we can talk about the clothing: Wearing punk clothing, lolita dresses or styled clothing is also writing "HEY EVERYBODY! I'M A MARY SUE!" on your forehead. Because Naruto is a manga about ninjas long long ago, lolita clothing and punk/gothic clothing were probably not invented yet. Though so, shorts and T-shirts seem to appear there. So shorts and T-shirts are SOOOOO out if you're going to make your VERY OWN MARY SUE!

3) Thirdly, we can talk about the body shape: Having Tsunade sized boobs will do.

4) After that, we'll be talking about the fighting style and chakra styles: It's alright to have more than one chakra style. If you own all the chakra natures and maybe even more--- (wood style, crystal style etc..) Congradulations. You're almost done on creating your VERY OWN MARY SUE!

5) Then. We'll be talking about social life: A crowd of friends and a crowd of enemies? Bish please. We can do better than that. We can either have A WHOLE CROWD OF ENEMIES, or A WHOLE CROWD OF FRIENDS. Either with no friends, or with no enemies. And by the way. Either make her SUPER DUPER FRIENDLY SO BUBBLY SHE NEVER FROWNS. Or, make her SUPER FUPER MEAN THAT NOBODY DARES TO COME NEAR HER. NOT EVEN PEIN OR MADARA.

6) Lastly, we'll be talking about crushes and lovers. Have a ton of fanboys even including Neji and Sasuke the stern ones. Then have a fablousa boyfriend like Itachi. And you've got yourself a MARY SUE!
Vola! Your VERY OWN MARY SUE! Wasn't that easy? Now, hopefully, you won't be attacked with critics. If you do create one with my help, do tell me so I can come and comment about it. Now enjoy your VERY OWN MARY SUE!
PS. Please note I created this for FUN. Also kinda a guide to avoid making a mary sue with this. I tried to make her as normal and non-sue-like-but-seriously-a-fail. And it isn't my OC of any type. I just came up with this person after reading a few OC informations. [[which were pretty pathetic to me, they pretty much pair themselves up with EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER]]
So yeah... Try not to make a Mary sue darlings.
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:iconnatalie4516:
Natalie4516 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
if i meet her: FLYING RAIJIN SLICE!
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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So, that's what a Mary Sue is! Thank-you!~ You just answered my question for today! :3
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
No problem dear~! :)
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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Btw, do all Mary-Sue's have to be females? :iconconfusedplz: I understand why its called "Mary-Sue" though...
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014

Well. For Mary Sues. Yes they are in fact all FEMALES.

But if you want a guy version of 'Mary Sue' we usually call them 'Gary Stu'

which is pretty much a genderbend version of a PERFECT female.

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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ack! I wish there was a meaning/saying of the perfect male OC besides the hack n' slash genderbend.

Although I will keep in mind of a (Gary-Stu)!~ :)

I'm think of creating something that resembles for the perfect male OC.I'm gonna make a stamp of it later though... Anyways, thank-you for your help. ;3
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:iconkitty-kozuki:
Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014

Ah- I see!

No problem, I'm glad to help!

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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If you'd like you could tutor me in writting OC profiles for my WIP stories."I can use whatever help I can get from a fellow deviant!~" :icondragonhugplz:
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
no problem on that~! Just bring this to Notes/ Comments on my profile! I'd gladly help :D
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Lightning12R Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
I have a question. Are impure Uchihas counted as Mary-sues? My oc's mother, who was a Uchiha before the massacre, was raped by someone in the hidden Yuki. So my oc's not technically a Uchiha. Does that make her a Mary-sue?
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