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How to create a mary sue. by Kitty-Kozuki How to create a mary sue. by Kitty-Kozuki
How to create a Naruto OC mary sue?
It's easy. But let's just start by understand the meaning of "mary sue".
A "mary sue" is a "perfect character". By looking at the picture and information I created in the picture, you would probably notice. "Wow. She is so powerful." Yes. But "I never lose a fight with my eneimies" That was a key point. People are bound to fail a fight. You can't win every single one of them.
Let's start to create your VERY OWN MARY SUE!
1) Let's start by background information: Having a slaughtered clan, slaughtering a clan pratically SCREAMS "I'M A FREAKING MARY SUE!" So do add that in the information. Also. DO add a demon into your character so she can be powerful.

2) Then, we can talk about the clothing: Wearing punk clothing, lolita dresses or styled clothing is also writing "HEY EVERYBODY! I'M A MARY SUE!" on your forehead. Because Naruto is a manga about ninjas long long ago, lolita clothing and punk/gothic clothing were probably not invented yet. Though so, shorts and T-shirts seem to appear there. So shorts and T-shirts are SOOOOO out if you're going to make your VERY OWN MARY SUE!

3) Thirdly, we can talk about the body shape: Having Tsunade sized boobs will do.

4) After that, we'll be talking about the fighting style and chakra styles: It's alright to have more than one chakra style. If you own all the chakra natures and maybe even more--- (wood style, crystal style etc..) Congradulations. You're almost done on creating your VERY OWN MARY SUE!

5) Then. We'll be talking about social life: A crowd of friends and a crowd of enemies? Bish please. We can do better than that. We can either have A WHOLE CROWD OF ENEMIES, or A WHOLE CROWD OF FRIENDS. Either with no friends, or with no enemies. And by the way. Either make her SUPER DUPER FRIENDLY SO BUBBLY SHE NEVER FROWNS. Or, make her SUPER FUPER MEAN THAT NOBODY DARES TO COME NEAR HER. NOT EVEN PEIN OR MADARA.

6) Lastly, we'll be talking about crushes and lovers. Have a ton of fanboys even including Neji and Sasuke the stern ones. Then have a fablousa boyfriend like Itachi. And you've got yourself a MARY SUE!
Vola! Your VERY OWN MARY SUE! Wasn't that easy? Now, hopefully, you won't be attacked with critics. If you do create one with my help, do tell me so I can come and comment about it. Now enjoy your VERY OWN MARY SUE!
PS. Please note I created this for FUN. Also kinda a guide to avoid making a mary sue with this. I tried to make her as normal and non-sue-like-but-seriously-a-fail. And it isn't my OC of any type. I just came up with this person after reading a few OC informations. [[which were pretty pathetic to me, they pretty much pair themselves up with EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER]]
So yeah... Try not to make a Mary sue darlings.
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Fennekintherapper Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
her clan got slayed by the Akatsuki? well my OC is in the Akatsuki... *evil grin*
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DarkNinjaMizuki Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kill ya 

*Keeps shooting the Mary Sue*

~<3 Mizuki
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
teheee
Mary Sues are so fun to make (#
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DarkNinjaMizuki Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Not for my eyes
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Natalie4516 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
if i meet her: FLYING RAIJIN SLICE!
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
Ahahahahahahaha
these characters are just ughh 

//imsosorryformylatereplyahahahaha//
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Natalie4516 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
nah, it's fine
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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So, that's what a Mary Sue is! Thank-you!~ You just answered my question for today! :3
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
No problem dear~! :)
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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Btw, do all Mary-Sue's have to be females? :iconconfusedplz: I understand why its called "Mary-Sue" though...
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014

Well. For Mary Sues. Yes they are in fact all FEMALES.

But if you want a guy version of 'Mary Sue' we usually call them 'Gary Stu'

which is pretty much a genderbend version of a PERFECT female.

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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ack! I wish there was a meaning/saying of the perfect male OC besides the hack n' slash genderbend.

Although I will keep in mind of a (Gary-Stu)!~ :)

I'm think of creating something that resembles for the perfect male OC.I'm gonna make a stamp of it later though... Anyways, thank-you for your help. ;3
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014

Ah- I see!

No problem, I'm glad to help!

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IchigoMurasaki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If you'd like you could tutor me in writting OC profiles for my WIP stories."I can use whatever help I can get from a fellow deviant!~" :icondragonhugplz:
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
no problem on that~! Just bring this to Notes/ Comments on my profile! I'd gladly help :D
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Lightning12R Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
I have a question. Are impure Uchihas counted as Mary-sues? My oc's mother, who was a Uchiha before the massacre, was raped by someone in the hidden Yuki. So my oc's not technically a Uchiha. Does that make her a Mary-sue?
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
In my opinion-- No. I have two impure Uchiha OCs of my own. Though they're only 1/4 Uchiha.
I think it'll work out, as long as the OC's mother is killed as she is full uchiha. And your OC shouldn't have the sharingan nor the whole Uchiha look (raven hair, black eyes, way too pale skin)

Though you might want to be careful around some people as they're more strict on Uchiha mary sues than me.
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Lightning12R Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Writer
Blackish-blue hair, blue eyes, pale skin. She took her mother's sharingan, but they were both taken by the time she was 12. One by Itachi, one by a ANBU member.
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
I don't really think that's a Mary sue as long as she can't use her sharingan. XD
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Janara-Emerata Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perfect.
Well said.
I hate bitches like that.
Keep your OC fresh with the fucking Naruto story line.
There are only 3 UCHIHA LEFT ALIVE IN THE SHOW THAT ARE PURE D<
Itachi Granted he was killed, Sasuke and Madara/Tobi.
Also.
The tailed beats.
Limit of 10.
No OC should have a tailed beast it does not follow the Naruto line.
Kekke Genkai.. Meh, some OC can have it but all Jutsu must have a flaw.
Mine do.
My OC Janara Emerata.
Demon Clan.
That isn't a kekke genaki but it is all about Chakra level.
To perform any sort of Jutsu mockery through thee eye.
Their chakra level must be un disturbed.
Only two Emerata have done it.
Fiki-Rashi the father of Janara, Kiza and Kallcifur.
Also.
It was another Emerata member. Kallcifur is slowly controlling the ability. They each are a mixed breed of demons. Kiza is a trickster type. Kallcifur an illusionist.
Janara.
Well, she sticks to summoning and odd Elementa.
Such as fire, but that is common.
Anywhore xD
I should shut up. Jana isn't a God Mod. She is mortal. Dies like any human would but has a better advantage of living.
But.
Mary Sue OC are fucking hilarious to look at.
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She is the dragon princess. Wolf Queen, Jashin;s daughter and just so much shit.
It;s annoying but very funny.
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
Yeah. Itachi must have done quite a crappy job killing the clan seeing there are so much Uchihas left!
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Yuki-the-Kisune Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
soooooooooooo True xD
Add: they also dont have weakness and every ones have crush on her/him (in thems imagination xD).
Well some of the marry sue had something in common with one of my OCs ;-; time to change her xD
BTW thanks for showing me :D i where going to have a Mary Sue in my main manga but i didnt find so good answer to get the moust Sue Mary Sue ever xD so yeah thanks for making this :)
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
No problem.
Thank YOU for spamming my messages with all those comments and favs.
^v^
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Yuki-the-Kisune Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :D
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
:)
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Yuki-the-Kisune Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
soooooooooooo True xD
Add: they also dont have weakness and every ones have crush on her/him (in thems imagination xD).
Well some of the marry sue had something in common with one of my OCs ;-; time to change her xD
BTW thanks for showing me :D i where going to have a Mary Sue in my main manga but i didnt find so good answer to get the moust Sue Mary Sue ever xD so yeah thanks for making this :)
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Yuki-the-Kisune Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry for commenting twice xD i clicked twice lol xD
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
I am so glad I found this example that you made. I fought a marry sue once. She was Son Goku's(The Four Tails) Jinchuuriki host. The girls Oc basically had two Advanced Nature Kekei Genkais: 1. Wood Release( A Water Release & Earth Release combo)2. Lava Release(A Fire Release & Earth Release combo), three of the seven ninja swordsmens swords. The girl was reanimated and broke free of the Summoning Reanimation jutsu. So her Chakra was basically unlimited, and she claimed to never have lost a battle. Last but not least she was a Senju and assumed all Senju can use Wood Release. Which isn't confirmed in the manga, so therefore she has made an incorrect. assumption. But what got me was when she claimed
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
LOL those pathetic people who don't even understand Naruto.
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Yup I kno lol and do you think the jutsu I made up is awesome? :D
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Hell yeah. :)
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Awesome and people often forget there is "Science" in rp. Ionization which is the process of lightning breaking down air. That is what the Lightning Clad uses as a seocondary defense. What happens is the lightning breaks down the molecues of harmful gases into individual harmless gases that are safe to breath. Due to the lightning "Negatively Charging" the molecues it prevents the gases from forming back to their original states. I put this in a post against the marry sue, after she used a poisoness vapor attack, that she could constantly breath. I usually don't use the Lightning Glad unless I have to. I was forced into using it by her unfortunately. I really save it for fast or very strong opponents. But my good friend the one I fought and had so much fun with. He said I was holding back too much and going easy on my opponents. Well he was right lol. Its just that technique is one of my guys best jutsu's. He can even move up to the speed of someone who has opened the "Gate Of Life". With the aid of his second advanced nature kekei genkai.
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Okay one last thing so I can stop bombing your page with my comments lol. Sorry I just like to talk a lot sometimes XD. Anyways so because she never specified important things in her post. Technically none of the stuff she said happened, and I found out she kept changing her post! I let go about beinf mad at her for deleting my post that wasn't unfair. But if I ever meet her in shinobi combat. I will show her the truth lol. This hapened in a Naruto guild on Gaia online. The guild has another new owner now.
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
XD It's okay. I love comments. Geez. Pathetic people.
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Then I went on to auto hit her, because she didn't read my post correctly. Assuming my guy was moving at normal speed or slower. So basicallly she got hit with my guys Latetal Bolt Of Pain attack, and she was sent flying. I stated the attack was powerful enough to snap her neck killing her on contact, and send her flying. So she deleted my post and we argued more. Then I said "fuck it" and I quit her guild because of auto hitters an god modders. I had a right to auto hit her to her ignoring important detail in my post. I never auto hit but that was my first time getting a rightful one lol. Recently I lost internet at home, so I missed my chance for a rematch and to kill her Oc. After I had rejoined with the same Oc and 2 others I have. In truth she is a coward and hides behind her friends to make herself look stronger, and the powers she has. When it comes down to it she isn't a worthy opponent for me or anyone. My best friend and I are like equals he is so fraking good I had a blast fighting him and he's an awesome writter too. His posts weren't boring like the marry sue. I have the highest respect and I consider him a worthy opponent.
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
The jutsu itself has weaknessses and Strengths. Like it's weak against Wind Release techniques, because wind has a conductive relationship with lightning. Fire release techniques can harm the user, do to the fact that lightning has Oxygen in it. Taking on too much water will short the justu out, and it will take some time to be reactivated. Powerful attacks from large weapons or projectiles are able to punch a hole in its defense too. The strengths are what I meantioed in my other comment, but the last one would be the jutsu can be used for long periods of time by the experienced user. Where a small amount of chakra is used. But over time it burns up a lot of chakra. Someone who is not experienced in using the jutsu will burn up a lot of chakra fairly fast. Ahem so getting the point after my essay of an explanation lol. I attacked her and I was only 2 feet away. She never specified how far she was from me. Then states she's talking to the four tails, and she was able to comprend my attack allowing herself to dodge.
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
So after I did ALL that explaining she has the nerve to tell me I am wrong. When I am up to date with the Manga and Anime. Then she told me to bow down to her because I'm scared she's the guild captain, and I'm an idiot. Now see what happened when I attacked her in my post. I stated in an earlier post how my OC's Lightning Release jutsu works. It's a custom jutsu I came up with called the "Lightning Clad". What it does is it encircles the users body in a flaming aura of "Lightning". Which serves as armor and can be used for an offensive Nintaijutsu move like Lightning Blade and Raikages moves basically. Or. Defensive means against harmful gases like poison or just physical attacks. The Lightning stimulates the users bodies nervous system. Allowing them to react to danger with sharper reflexes. Then it stimulates the muscles allowing them to use over the normal 20% limit, but not 100% like the Gate Of Opening. Lastly the user is able to move up to the speed of someone who's opened the first two Inner chakra gates. They can also repair the Lightning Clad at will, after taking heavy damage to it. However the regeneration processs gets slower the more they use it.
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Neji-No-Tensai Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Lol yup and what got me was she claimed her OC could use more than 10% of her brain which is not possible.Thus allowing her to sense and comprehend attacks less than a second. Like how your life flashes before your eyes. Is what they always say and she gave me this example. When we talked OOC about her post. Then she went on about how she knows how the human brain works. Then how she could manifest the four tails as a summoning. I explained the difference between a manifestation and a "Host Transfotmation". Since she told me she stopped reading the manga and only watches the anime. I told here I read the manga and watch the anime. 'Cause its just one of the many animes I love.
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Elesion Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thumbs up.
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Kitty-Kozuki Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Thanks deary~
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